Wednesday - Feedback partner essay

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 Today we got with a partner and read our essays and gave feedback. I learned how to properly revise and give feedback to an essay. I personally think I will use this in college when I'm working with a partner on anything involving writing. I disliked this assignment because we had to get with partners. My day is going pretty well since my week has been off to a good start.

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